Nowadays, people are living in the machine world. AI comes to appear. people’s mind is easily influenced by machine. Because, they think machine is always right. My work is about fake lie detector. When people are asked some questions, the third person can use phone to control it secretly. If people are easily affected by machine, they will change the their true mind.
Hi Joey, where is your google doc draft? It should contain the paragraph text and outline you have so far, and the doc makes it easy for me to give you copyediting feedback. I’ve created one for you here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nts6SMYQiIDFvqcix7R-4l6YRN73cD-I5dEvBb8tdiU/edit?usp=sharing